Comment: Hey Tim, it's a start. I'm feeling the sub-title Rise of the Silver Surfer. But hey, No mention of GALACTUS! Can you have a story without the guy who's responsible for Norrin Radd becoming the Silver Surfer in the first place?? But the work of the Thing's brow is a definite must and I didn't think that Doom was sinister looking enough. Kudos and good luck!